Monday, January 14, 2008

Epiphany of the Creative Morgue

Empty out my cauldron mind
And label it: “Infinity”
Spread me like an orange rind—
The herald of precocity.

I’ve drunk bile in my bones
At the grandest of delusions,
And reached alto in the Thrones
To clamber up confusions.

Down the river-barge I gait
To the questioning of Silence,
(A brief affair fall to spate
Volcanic nodes of violence.)

My fetus heart gone flaccid
At this chilling lack—emotions,
Has placed my soul a-placid
With each dizzying of notions.

To douse my head, and wipe my pen;
To write—to think!—of better men.

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At 7:46 PM , Blogger Taidgh Lynch said...

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At 7:48 PM , Blogger Taidgh Lynch said...

Had to clean up a view grammatic errors I made so i had to delete my previous post to do just that. Blogger is a bit of a pain.

Anyways this is what i said: Nice poem - i like the 'ive drunk bile in bones' bit. The poem sounds a bit like Divine Comedy and Dante's journey into hell, which there are obvious references to. It's not a bad thing though and it is effective when it relates to your theme and your journey as a writer.

So what about your prose, any quick glances for me?

 

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