A Life Metaphor
If it ain't abstract, I don't know what is. But read it cause Dre said so, and Dre know's what is best...
If I snorkeled correctly
The world would be
A better place;
I would not have to
Explain:
(But perhaps I still would)
The coral growing
On
My face.
Labels: writing and poetry
posted by thisisme @ 2:11 PM
5 Comments
5 Comments:
Haha yeah... abstract. But it made me give a curious little grin in an I-have-no-idea-what-this-is-about-but-I-sense-it-is-amusing way. And I always love rhyme. :P
... This is complete trash! And you call yourself a writer?! This nearly beats the sappy garbage u were posting before. At least that had something behind it, as emo as it is. But this is even worse! My little brother could probably write something more intelligent than this!
you KNOW what i think about this.
subcontext
subcontext
subcontext.
and toxi, what are your feelings on the jabberwock?
Sorry Dre, to anyone who has lived near coral this is not abstract... but common sense.
Its o.k. Gabe, I would venture to say that most of us haven't.
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