Something from a poem
Glaze my gaze with your summer days,
In glades and lakes secrets revealed;
Myriads of Dryads dance your ways
With secret souls, in heart, congealed.
Yes, it is mine, third stanza or somethingish I think it was... now tell me what you think of it. I hate the title though, nasty little thing and I think I'll change it sooner or later. But no, I won't put it up here yet... still need to finish the editing of it. This snippet is just one of my favorite quatrians I've done in a long time.
5 Comments:
sooooooooooooo nice love
It sounds a little like Don Mclean in the beginning...hehe
bastard. i'm going straighaway to write something perfect. i am still your superior. damn it.
cough
Maybe... its that fresh air thats starting to clear your senses damnit!
love it
dre ur too cool!
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