A New One
Still don't have a working title for it yet... but here it is nonetheless
You were my ashen edifice
Of tepid will, coerced at last,
In smoldering, my evidence,
Unto the altar named “Alas”.
And leaking there between the stones
Our virtues stopped and stood to meet
The weeping king cast from his thrones,
In purple tribute of our feat:
We breathed too fast, we laughed too long,
We lived two lives of dynamite,
That once exploded into song
And blew the sky clean out of sight.
But once exploded, gravity
Cannot restore two parts to one,
Cannot restore the cavity
Of darkened soul, devoid of sun.
We cannot fight with math, my dear,
I do not know why life is mean;
We cannot hunt the stars, I fear
That would exceed our standard scene.
Perhaps it’d be more natural
To leave it as it seems?
Labels: writing and poetry


4 Comments:
beautiful! A true poet
suck up.
anyhow, you know what i think of this.
in lewd detail.
Hey man, long time never see...but hey im still alive, youre still alive....lots to be thankful for. but you bro, you have always kept it real. So in a fraze to make up for years of lost time. I'm proud of you!!
Love ya, God bless....out peace
I first thought, now don't get mad, that a women wrote this poem, it almost seemed like the one I wrote on my blog the other day, but was surprised and happy that it was a man who wrote it, it's great I like it very much.
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